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I Love The Autunm
Contributed by
candysears
on
Friday, 23rd September 2005 @ 01:31:20 PM in AEST
Topic:
NaturePoetry
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I love the fall of the year
The fall brings the autumn
Bliss,
The colors are mix of yellows
Green, orange as the golden
Setting of the sun;
Making the landscape of a
Beautiful portrait in the
Making,
Leaves all yellow brown and
Orange golden,
As each leaf kiss the wintry
Wind chill turning each one
Into a wonderful moment of
Blissful bliss
With the wintry crisp breath
Chilling the air
Colors vividly bright, the
Autumn brings all the beauty
Proudly paraded
Knowing know other can take
Its place
The frost of the morning dew
Chilled to perfection
The fresh crisp scent of the
Morning dew cannot be
Beaten while the autumn
Shines
Yes, I love the autumn
Chills, the coloring of
The leaves and the fresh
Scent it brings
Don’t you know god
Is so wonderful?
As bold and beautiful as
He gives us the beauty
To stare upon,
To hold forever his beauty
In our mind and heart to
Enjoy.
I love the fall, when the
Autumn shines
Copyright ©
candysears
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2005-09-23 13:31:20]
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Re: I Love The Autunm
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by ArsenicMyst on
Saturday, 24th September 2005 @ 08:18:02 PM AEST
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i love the autmn too
just as you do
your words shine
but were this my write ...
i would edit a 1/4 of it
for a clearer view
of the wonderful images
so dear to you
*.¸¸.·´*Arsenic
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Re: I Love The Autunm
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Sunday, 25th September 2005 @ 12:59:16 AM AEST
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A beautifully expressed piece of poetry. I love the imagery u cast upon ur reader. I too, also love autumn. A very well crafted poem. Well done.
Hugs,
Sue, Dreamer |
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