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The Tables Turned (Dying to Feel this)
Contributed by
Twysted_Fate
on
Friday, 23rd September 2005 @ 03:38:49 AM in AEST
Topic:
happypoetry
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I've waited for this day,
for what seems the longest of time..
Soon, soon from you,
I'll have collected my last dime.
I told you I was leaving,
gave you plenty of warnings,
now soon I'll be gone,
and you'll be in mourning..
"I should have been nicer,
maybe then he'd of stayed."
meaningless words from your mouth,
counting down my last days.
Freedom like this,
I've never felt this before,
I try my hardest not to spit at you,
when I at last walk through that door.
I'd really like to say I enjoyed it all,
oh how hard I would try,
but Mother always told me,
that its just naughty to lie.
I guess it hasn't been all bad,
that too would be a lie,
maybe watch the store suffer,
but for my friends sake there, it not die.
As I walk out the door,
and your juices they start to stew,
I realize its not hate I feel,
but I cast pity upon you..
You see once again,
these tables again will be turned,
when you treat people like dirt,
Ya gonna get burned.
I'ts a painful lesson to learn,
dude, I know how it hurts..
maybe now from this day out,
we won't see such a jerk.
As I walk out the door,
into a warm air of bliss,
the sweet kiss of freedom,
I've been dying to feel this.
And as I once promised,
for the whole world to see,
my last words to you are..
teehee... surprise...
BITE ME!!!!!
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Twysted_Fate
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2005-09-23 03:38:49]
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Re: The Tables Turned (Dying to Feel this)
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by Jimmato on
Friday, 23rd September 2005 @ 04:31:51 AM AEST
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| Id really like to use an expletive here starting with --s-- to state --s-- yeah. Everyone can relate at in general the flow was steady. good write. |
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Re: The Tables Turned (Dying to Feel this)
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by justme03 on
Friday, 23rd September 2005 @ 09:47:41 AM AEST
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Haha I love this poem
this rox! :D |
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Re: The Tables Turned (Dying to Feel this)
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by oreo_kisses on
Saturday, 24th September 2005 @ 04:17:40 PM AEST
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| AWESOME POEM...lol... i love how you use bite me in alot of your poems:P...lol... keep up the good work! |
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Re: The Tables Turned (Dying to Feel this)
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by Man_On_High on
Thursday, 29th September 2005 @ 09:00:07 PM AEST
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So heartless..lol
But great just the same..
well written..and great honesty as well..
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