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Christmas eve
Contributed by
needs_change
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Thursday, 22nd September 2005 @ 09:52:16 PM in AEST
Topic:
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sirens scream into his ears
she is far too young for tears
"what does this mean? Mommy, where did he go?"
he disappered like the melting snow
the man in white says he tried everything
but he is too far gone to save
when they get home she runs to his room
she thinks that he will be home soon
hours pass and days roll on
she doesn't think he is really gone
laying on her pillow resting on her bed
she sits beside him, questions in her head
"where did you go? Why were you gone?"
"you will learn soon, sis, how to move on"
mom enters the room
she looks slightly confused
"honey who were you talking to?"
"bubby. he's here. look right next to me."
she doesn't know only she can see
mom leaves the room more worried than before
as she walks out she shuts the door
"only you know, panda, only you see
because you were the only one waiting for me."
"i don't understand, bubby, what do you mean?"
he smiles and kisses the top of her head
his spirit lives on though his body is dead
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Re: Christmas eve
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by Pisces101 on
Thursday, 22nd September 2005 @ 10:19:22 PM AEST
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| beautiful. nice flow of rhyme. |
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Re: Christmas eve
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by mjh0813 on
Friday, 23rd September 2005 @ 09:19:41 AM AEST
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i really liked it! made me kinda tear up though..lol good write keep it up
meg |
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