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My World
Contributed by
lil_pup91
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Thursday, 22nd September 2005 @ 09:01:02 PM in AEST
Topic:
anguished
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My World is shatterd
My World is hushed
My wold is broken
My world is crushed
everything is quiet
nothing is new
to me its all the same
for its me who takes all the blame
Copyright ©
lil_pup91
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2005-09-22 21:01:02]
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Re: My World
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by justme03 on
Thursday, 22nd September 2005 @ 09:11:26 PM AEST
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very short and simple, but..WOAH!
it really blew me away
i wish i could write so much liek u did here with so little words. wow
i love this
the ryhmeing is awesome. the title is great. the poem speaks volumes and wow ya
totally great! *hugs*
luv, Kortnie |
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Re: My World
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 22nd September 2005 @ 10:25:46 PM AEST
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| Short and simple, but so powerful. Nice work. |
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Re: My World
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by In_a_while on
Friday, 23rd September 2005 @ 03:51:07 PM AEST
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Very real and emotionally raw! I loved the four opening lines and the last half sealed the reader's fate.
Keep up extra fine writing!
dw |
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