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Pain
Contributed by
alyssakoren_03
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Thursday, 22nd September 2005 @ 06:58:39 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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I am insane
I can't see through all the rain
I got hit by a train
Oh my god. oh the pain
actually its' quiet a blast
the pain went so fast
it just didn't last
Now all the wonderful blood is in the past
AS i stand some one grabs my hand
and pulls me on to solid land
oy! It's filled with sand
then throws something in my eye
then i began to cry
now i want to die
pull off my skin and let it fry!
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2005-09-22 18:58:39]
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Re: Pain
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 22nd September 2005 @ 07:41:31 PM AEST
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| interesting...quite morbid...feel better you can always talk to me but im glad your getting your emotions out |
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Re: Pain
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by Chubs on
Thursday, 22nd September 2005 @ 08:54:35 PM AEST
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| i agree with her, it is very morbid. but it was good |
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