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tears
Contributed by
shaggy2468
on
Thursday, 22nd September 2005 @ 05:40:56 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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a tear drops
the world stops
but one tear
doesn't show fear
anymore.
Copyright ©
shaggy2468
... [
2005-09-22 17:40:56] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: tears
(User Rating: 1 ) by WAE on
Thursday, 22nd September 2005 @ 06:46:00 PM AEST (User
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Very nice one...
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Re: tears
(User Rating: 1 ) by Chubs on
Thursday, 22nd September 2005 @ 08:56:33 PM AEST (User
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good poem. not that it's a bad thing though, but i thought it was really short |
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