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childish dreams
Contributed by
hardrocker15198916
on
Thursday, 22nd September 2005 @ 05:25:07 PM in AEST
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walking in the pasture
a little girls mind captures
the remains of an old mans heart
why was he torn apart
silently as she swung
as though in slow motion
standing on the swing
church bells of the morning sing
falling forward in the air
a cool brisk morning of fall
reaching to the dead ones old and gone
listening to thier final call
so young and naive
as though she cant percieve
the world she lives is a dream
from none this world is seen
she doesnt have a care in the world
no treasure that she needs
all she has is her hopeless freedom
and her sweet but childish dreams
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Re: childish dreams
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by gwenevere on
Thursday, 22nd September 2005 @ 05:30:10 PM AEST
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| the innocence of childhood.If only it were to remain so, Ros |
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Re: childish dreams
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by Manda2 on
Thursday, 22nd September 2005 @ 05:47:51 PM AEST
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| I liked this poem very much, it was refreshing. Thanks for the pleasure. |
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Re: childish dreams
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by Archie on
Friday, 30th September 2005 @ 12:40:16 AM AEST
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| I think it is good to dream so long as we can mold our hearts to a dream that is inspiring. I do not think your dreams are childish. A child like heart is what helps us get through life. |
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Re: childish dreams
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by Kimmie_mac on
Wednesday, 19th July 2006 @ 10:53:36 PM AEST
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So beautiful and it shows the mind of youths. Oh, to be that age again.
Thanks,
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