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Heartache is violence
Contributed by
In_a_while
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Thursday, 22nd September 2005 @ 03:41:24 PM in AEST
Topic:
anguished
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No more dead paint please
my art is what's weeping
disease covers dead trees
to keep the paint sleeping
she's gone towards sunset
fade like tears small
tomorrow's just dry sweat
wait for rain's fall
the paint in me dries
i then milk my depression
my canvas, my grey eyes
reveal no confession
she left me the silence
to ponder despair
my heartache is violence
that shatters the air
i can't paint the pain
it's the ocean at night
would you taste the stain
if it brought the morn's light?
dw
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Re: Heartache is violence
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by hauntedscorp on
Thursday, 22nd September 2005 @ 08:25:33 PM AEST
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Nice. Very nice---especially those last 3 stanzas---wow! You have your own unique style, that's for sure Dwayne...keep it up!
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Re: Heartache is violence
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by Kristina_Simpson_Stewart on
Wednesday, 28th February 2007 @ 10:50:31 AM AEST
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Your words paint the picture. Beautifully written.
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