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Why you're gone
Contributed by
Joe
on
Saturday, 18th January 2003 @ 12:40:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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I know a few words that could confuse you - That could make you once again wonder
These words I speak of are ones bourne of things untogether
And with these words I could change, maybe for just an instant, the way you feel-
How you see things - if what you believe is truly real
But in by doing so I too change my world - For these words are all I have
They are my illusion - All that keep me from going mad
For I believe by keeping them from you - I never gave my all
And thats the reason why...you're gone.
Copyright ©
Joe
... [
2003-01-18 00:40:00]
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Re: Why you're gone
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 18th January 2003 @ 03:00:48 AM AEST
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| Sometimes even your all isn't good enough. That's tough to come to terms with, but it's just one of those things that happens. Great write. I do so enjoy your poetry. |
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Re: Why you're gone
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by BlackAngel on
Sunday, 19th January 2003 @ 10:35:20 AM AEST
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| i know what you mean...my friend was once in your position..and because of that..he lost his love... |
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Re: Why you're gone
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by mckayla on
Saturday, 8th February 2003 @ 07:49:01 PM AEST
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What A sad poem. Your heart must be broken.
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