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Frozen
Contributed by
xxbreathlessx
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Thursday, 22nd September 2005 @ 03:29:58 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Swinging lashes flirt gently with the tip of your brow bone,
Black as the Night’s bittersweet scream,
They dance amongst your eyelids.
Frozen cold with dreams and wishes
As whispers of bloodshot veins curve along your
Eye’s pasty clouds.
With a single glance your left quite breathless,
Uttering only sounds that exist in the language
Of forgotten pain.
A drop of blood grasps on to the lashes,
Clumped together by the dampness of your tears.
The drop
Crashing against the paleness of your skin,
Illuminates red.
Deep dark bloody red.
Your eyes blink as your heart’s icy cold breath impales it
Leaving drops of frost amongst the rims of your eyes.
Glittering solid ice.
I’m left with the impression
Of your eye’s intensity.
Embedded deep within my minds shadow.
Unable to forget the stare of sorrow.
Unable to escape the gaze of a spellbound creation.
Here’s to the cold.
Here’s to the tear.
Here’s to the gloom shining in your eyes.
Here’s to good-bye.
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Re: Frozen
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by jaeann on
Thursday, 22nd September 2005 @ 04:28:49 PM AEST
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| i love how your inspiration was conveyed.....you have a beautiful way with words......very surreal.....you let the reader see through you and onto what inspired you.....amazing.... |
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Re: Frozen
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by candysears on
Thursday, 29th December 2005 @ 07:26:04 PM AEST
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I love the ending of this write..
Very good indeed....
God Bless...
Rated 10.... |
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