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I Love You
Contributed by
Pomicio
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Thursday, 22nd September 2005 @ 01:39:51 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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"I love you,
Yes I do,
You may not think it's true,
But I really do love you.
You bring the joy in my life,
You bring the light in my heart,
I love you so much,
When I look into your eyes,
I see the future,
I see a long lasting bond,
That can only be broken by you.
I do things for you,
because I love you,
We have something special,
I can never let you go,
please don't ever leave me,
because I love you.
I'm glad you're in my life,
I would die for you,
You may not think it's true,
But I really do love you."
Please give your input.
Thank you,
Kevin
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2005-09-22 13:39:51] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: I Love You
(User Rating: 1 ) by Dri on
Thursday, 22nd September 2005 @ 03:06:26 PM AEST (User
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this is simple and sort of... well, young. i like the topic, but it sounds kind of trite.
but that's just me.
i like how earnest this is though, despite the flaws. |
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