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Someplace Far Away
Contributed by
kaya-chan
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Thursday, 22nd September 2005 @ 01:24:59 PM in AEST
Topic:
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there is nothing here
nothing left of me
only an empty shell
watching with eyes of glass
a living doll
my soul is no longer grounded
its wandering the universe
traversing the mountains of questions
swimming the seas of knowledge
someplace far away....
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kaya-chan
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2005-09-22 13:24:59]
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Re: Someplace Far Away
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by In_a_while on
Thursday, 22nd September 2005 @ 03:06:14 PM AEST
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Very eerie and lonely as well. It's well put together though, with a really potent ending too. I think it's great! Especially with the image of the living doll and glass eyes
Keep up the excellent writing!!
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Re: Someplace Far Away
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by ArsenicMyst on
Friday, 23rd September 2005 @ 05:13:37 PM AEST
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very fragile and delicate this poem ...
... magical ... in those far away places ...
*´¨`Arsenic |
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