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No One Knows
Contributed by
sad_little_shard
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Thursday, 22nd September 2005 @ 12:35:40 PM in AEST
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No one knows my pain inside,
No one knows what i hide.
No one knows my dark thoughts,
No one knows the pain i've thought.
I hide my pain with a smile,
Crying inside all the while.
No one can see beneath my skin,
That's because i let no one in.
No one would care if i said,
The painful thoughts inside my head.
I sit and laugh with them all,
Knowing soon my sheild will fall.
No one knows the hurt this school,
Brings upon this lonely fool.
Everyone knows when i've lied,
But no one would know if i died.
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Re: No One Knows
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 22nd September 2005 @ 12:43:15 PM AEST
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| I feel for you. Hope things get better or have got better since. |
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Re: No One Knows
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by frmpoison2static on
Thursday, 22nd September 2005 @ 01:03:45 PM AEST
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| i can totally relate. |
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Re: No One Knows
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by kcampbell on
Thursday, 22nd September 2005 @ 01:22:50 PM AEST
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| I come from a similar position, but know there is hope, you can keep going, no matter what happens, you can. |
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Re: No One Knows
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by WAE on
Thursday, 22nd September 2005 @ 02:11:13 PM AEST
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This two lines are good:
No one would care if i said,
The painful thoughts inside my head.
Best of luck!
Alex
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Re: No One Knows
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by gwenevere on
Thursday, 22nd September 2005 @ 05:33:55 PM AEST
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| Live with hope.There is caring out there.Good luck, Ros |
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Re: No One Knows
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by loura on
Friday, 23rd September 2005 @ 12:39:18 PM AEST
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sometimes i feel the exact same way...but i never managed to put it down on paper...it would never sound right...always untrue...
i admire you for managing to write it and i thank you for letting me know that i'm not alone...that other people feel this way as well!
best wishes,
laura |
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Re: No One Knows
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by sidneyconrad23 on
Wednesday, 17th November 2010 @ 06:24:45 AM AEST
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| Poetry are feelings deep inside us and the way to let people know how we feel are to write them down a out standing write you do have a gift keep on writing. |
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