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childs play
Contributed by
maestar
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Thursday, 22nd September 2005 @ 10:42:05 AM in AEST
Topic:
fictional
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Stop telling me you love me you're married to my freind,
and your pet mr Ferbie is driving me round the bend.
The roof has been blown of and the weathers getting worse,
and yesterday you wont beleive a mugger stole my purse.
The baby wont stop crying I think she's getting ill,
and my great aunt died 2 weeks ago and I got a mansion in the will.
Oh damm my dinners ready we'll have to prospone,
and when I get back theres a killer on the phone.
Put your dolls back in there boxes my mother calmly said,
cos straight after your dinner you're going up to bed.
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maestar
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2005-09-22 10:42:05]
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Re: childs play
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by Jeff_Scott_Morehead on
Thursday, 22nd September 2005 @ 11:56:01 AM AEST
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Very interesting write...
I liked it
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Re: childs play
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by remote on
Thursday, 22nd September 2005 @ 01:37:42 PM AEST
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| Very funny, hope you got the mansion at least. Well done. |
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Re: childs play
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by Manda2 on
Thursday, 22nd September 2005 @ 04:03:34 PM AEST
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| A brilliant poem maestar, how inventive. Seven years ago you were living a very imaginative life and you're still young enough to keep doing just that. Keep writing little genius! |
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Re: childs play
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by MorningDove on
Thursday, 22nd September 2005 @ 06:03:10 PM AEST
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That is too cute. Loved it.
Rita |
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Re: childs play
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by Candice on
Wednesday, 21st December 2005 @ 09:02:50 AM AEST
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Wow that realy took me back.
I remember our games.
Useing the remote controle as the telephone and getting all dressed up in Mums cloths for a night out in the front room smoking bits of paper and dancing the night away to Gina Gee. Thanks for the memories. |
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