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untitled
Contributed by
sidra
on
Friday, 17th January 2003 @ 11:40:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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obession is control
countrol is your obsession
this is what i found
an what you want
i have everything to give you
my heart my soul an not to mention my thoughts
this is all i have to give
i want to see your face
ill try to show affection
if you'll be my reflection
so i can see myself in you
an you can see yourself in me
this is obsession has grown there is no more changing it
am i for you
an are you for me
Copyright ©
sidra
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2003-01-17 23:40:00] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: untitled
(User Rating: 1 ) by Fenril(_a.k.a_ZTAP) on
Sunday, 26th January 2003 @ 10:15:00 AM AEST (User
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I like this, is short and yet full of meaning, but its like that kind of relationship is a little bit twisted, |
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Re: untitled
(User Rating: 1 ) by gohar on
Monday, 16th June 2003 @ 11:50:45 PM AEST (User
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Hello Sidra,AsSalam.
Your poems are nice.
Greetings from Atlanta.
Gohar
www.Goreja.com |
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Re: untitled
(User Rating: 1 ) by Saira on
Tuesday, 17th June 2003 @ 04:01:20 PM AEST (User
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It's a lovely write. Well done! |
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Re: untitled
(User Rating: 1 ) by RICHARD_CAMPBELL on
Sunday, 6th July 2003 @ 06:50:48 PM AEST (User
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HI,SIDRA,
THIS IS A GOOD WRITE.U SURE HAVE A WAY WITH WORD. |
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