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Shatter
Contributed by
yellow_sundragon
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Thursday, 22nd September 2005 @ 03:38:23 AM in AEST
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Here I am, flying "home"
But this time, not alone
This time You hold my hand
And say "don't quiver, my lamb"
For four months I'll be away
From the home I want to stay
But You have led me here
You are calming my fear
How have I come so far in You?
And now I know what's really true
You've held my hand as I've stumbled
You've bandaged me when I've tumbled
And here You sit beside me,
The sinner whom You set free
As I wait to board this flight
I hear You whisper "it's alright"
You already know how I'll fall
And how I'll think I've lost it all
But for right now it doesn't matter
You'll hold me as I start to shatter
Jaime Moran
Last stanza written July 10th 2005
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Re: Shatter
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 22nd September 2005 @ 04:30:55 AM AEST
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That is a great poem! Inspiring write. Thanks for sharing.
Tim
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Re: Shatter
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by Archie on
Thursday, 22nd September 2005 @ 05:38:20 PM AEST
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| It is always good to connect with forgiveness. I think you do a great job of showing this in your poem. |
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Re: Shatter
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 25th November 2005 @ 03:20:48 PM AEST
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Only you could mix beauty and sadness together in words so eloquently dear. My god, I've missed you and your writing lately. You're back now, from the trip, I take it? I hope it went well.
Take Care
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