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Felt like God
Contributed by
remote
on
Thursday, 22nd September 2005 @ 02:03:37 AM in AEST
Topic:
NaturePoetry
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The sky tonight was
lit up in supernal fireworks.
Lightening zapped in all directions.
Not a single moment passed
when lightening was not seen
weaving the darkened sky.
It was one hallowed show.
Oh how can I tell you of my joy
of seeing amazing diamonds
in all different colours there are
as far as eyes could see:
The rain drops suspended
caught in a flashy fleeting moment.
The diamonds had the life of their own.
They danced a divine dance.
A dance to the magical symphony.
The symphony of thunder's rumble,
a rumble as deep as a million cellos,
playing from soul's depth
and percussion of falling rain drops
in little puddles,
and bouncing off the every leaf
of every trees in the garden.
And wind, it had to join in too
with melodies of heavenly flutes
Yes, tonight I feel like God
for who else
could this celestial show unfold?
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remote
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Re: Felt like God
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by yellow_sundragon on
Thursday, 22nd September 2005 @ 03:52:26 AM AEST
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| I love the rain. I love to sit for hours in the rain (probably why I'm so sick right now, eugh). I totally understand what you mean, about feeling like God. It's amazing.... so is your poem... I felt like I was watching the rain pour.... |
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Re: Felt like God
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by colinbaker62 on
Thursday, 22nd September 2005 @ 06:02:13 AM AEST
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The imagery at work was very effective indeed. Great me thinks..
Colin |
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Re: Felt like God
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 22nd September 2005 @ 09:02:35 PM AEST
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A great peice of writting and most deffinately
worthy tribute 2 the main man himself, nice style and presentation . . .
Ben |
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Re: Felt like God
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by thumper on
Friday, 23rd September 2005 @ 07:47:02 AM AEST
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This is a very visual write. (?) It put me right there with every rain drop. It also gave me the shudders 'cause lightening scares the be-jeebers outta me! lol Kudos to you.
Thumper ;o) |
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