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I can be strong for now.
Contributed by
Lollypopxcore
on
Thursday, 22nd September 2005 @ 12:15:32 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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God, I hate this feeling
It's sickening my stomache
I want that razorblade
And I feel an urge to vomit
My tongue is drying up now
My heart is broke
and I can feel it.
I'll try my heardest to stay strong..
But no words could ever heal this.
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Lollypopxcore
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2005-09-22 00:15:32]
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Re: I can be strong for now.
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by Evening_Star on
Tuesday, 27th September 2005 @ 03:59:31 AM AEST
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So far I think its good. I really like the last two lines I'll try my heardest to stay strong But no words could ever heal this. It is almost inspiring
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Re: I can be strong for now.
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by reecy on
Friday, 7th October 2005 @ 10:50:45 AM AEST
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I really like it! it has good potential... the end bit is defiantly the strongest.. nice write!
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