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My Comfort
Contributed by
sylviawalters
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Wednesday, 21st September 2005 @ 10:54:15 PM in AEST
Topic:
self-harmpoetry
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Leave me alone awhile,
Please give me time.
I don't need your comfort,
I already have mine.
A strip of metal,
Sharpened along one side.
So much damage can be done,
By this piece 1 inch wide.
If this metal and skin touch,
It may start to bleed.
This won't make me mad,
It would have fufilled my need.
Copyright ©
sylviawalters
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2005-09-21 22:54:15]
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Re: My Comfort
(User Rating: 1 )
by sweetestsin101 on
Monday, 3rd October 2005 @ 12:44:43 AM AEST
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... i kno exactly how u feel. i didnt want comfort either, and so much damage CAN be done with a strip of metel... fantastic write. keep it, but be careful.
~*~LEXI~*~ |
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Re: My Comfort
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by myfinalbreath on
Tuesday, 4th October 2005 @ 12:41:53 AM AEST
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| great use of imagery, it really flows. great write, keep it up. |
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