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Torturous Delight
Contributed by
CBlake
on
Wednesday, 21st September 2005 @ 08:19:49 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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The pain you cause
You’ll never know.
The things you cause
Will never show.
The hurt I feel,
It breaks me fast.
The sick thing is,
I want this to last.
This agony is
My ecstasy.
What can I say?
I love when you hurt me.
Make me bleed,
And make me cry.
Over and over,
My twisted high.
Crush me, kill me,
Make me scream.
Bend me, break me,
Complete my dream.
Baby, just destroy me,
First body, then soul.
Leave me with a broken heart
And try to make it whole.
Kill my spirit.
Beat me senseless.
Please baby?
You won’t regret this.
Copyright ©
CBlake
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2005-09-21 20:19:49]
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Re: Torturous Delight
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by Inevitable on
Wednesday, 21st September 2005 @ 08:34:35 PM AEST
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| Love it. Makes me feel like I'm not alone anymore. thanx |
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Re: Torturous Delight
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by xxbreathlessx on
Wednesday, 21st September 2005 @ 09:28:42 PM AEST
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| wow..simple yet so damn powerful. i love how the passion builds up at the end i can almost her your plea echo in my ear. loved it. |
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Re: Torturous Delight
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by highly_flammable on
Wednesday, 21st September 2005 @ 09:59:45 PM AEST
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| I've never really heard it put like that but I loved it! That was amazing. Excellent! Keep up the good work. I'll look forward to reading more from you. |
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Re: Torturous Delight
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 22nd September 2005 @ 03:01:29 PM AEST
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My favorite lines are "Make me bleed/ And make me cry/ Over and Over/ My twisted high"
Very powerful. |
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