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Dark Guardians
Contributed by
AshRayne
on
Wednesday, 21st September 2005 @ 08:09:18 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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The outside does not allow me,
To see what resides within.
A painted face,
And chipped darkness,
Guard the treasure inside.
I don’t know anything about you,
And though I try not to intrude,
I keep turning away,
Afraid of what those guards could do.
I want to ask your name,
Let no harsh words befall.
I yearn to know more about you,
To see inside your mind.
I want to share your burden,
Guards, please permit me safe passage.
You might be a little different,
Or simply misunderstood.
Just let down you guard, this once,
I have no wish to change you.
Copyright ©
AshRayne
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2005-09-21 20:09:18]
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Re: Dark Guardians
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by xxbreathlessx on
Wednesday, 21st September 2005 @ 09:29:53 PM AEST
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| a very accpeting and understanding poem. i liked the concept of it good job. |
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Re: Dark Guardians
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by Fionndruinne on
Wednesday, 21st September 2005 @ 11:12:10 PM AEST
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Perceptive work. It's certainly true about such masks, and they harm the wearer as much as any other. Sad, what selfishness causes...
Keep writing.
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Re: Dark Guardians
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 22nd September 2005 @ 08:14:01 PM AEST
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yeh we do sort of live in the shaddows of our insecurities but then i suppose it's cause of our fear of the unknown or perhaps just the anticipation of rejection or even worse, judgement from othere nice writting deffinately a most provacative poem . . .
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Re: Dark Guardians
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Wednesday, 28th September 2005 @ 06:37:51 PM AEST
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A brilliantly crafted piece of dark poetry. I love the way you've brought this across to ur reader. A talented writer whose talent shines through their work. Well done on this awesome write. Thanks for sharing it.
Hugs,
Sue, Dreamer |
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