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Moon Child...
Contributed by
eternal_dreamer
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Wednesday, 21st September 2005 @ 06:04:03 PM in AEST
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Oh child of the moon
As she smiles a sweet smile
Looks up at the luminous light
Shining away hundreds of miles
Each night she awaits
For the moon's presence
So glorious and tranquil
An eternity of vigilance
She's like a little marionette
Who dances with mirth
Each and every night
Since the time of her birth
Amongst the flowering Olearias
She lays, eyes cast to the sky
As the pretentious lunate
Emerges way up high
The stars dance infinite
Amidst the Milky Way
As the child of the moon
Reveries as she lays
Night after night
Her loyal heart watches from afar
While the waltzing moon settles gently
Amidst the blazing stars...
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Re: Moon Child...
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by MorningDove on
Wednesday, 21st September 2005 @ 06:12:06 PM AEST
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So very beautiful, just like our Raquel. She will absolutely love this, Sue. I know I did.
Love,
Rita |
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Re: Moon Child...
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by lostrelic on
Wednesday, 21st September 2005 @ 06:35:01 PM AEST
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what a great poem for a great person nice work
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Re: Moon Child...
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 21st September 2005 @ 06:46:16 PM AEST
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| beautiful poem for a beautiful poet from a beautiful poet,,I love it ,,hugs Eddy |
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by AshRayne on
Wednesday, 21st September 2005 @ 08:13:09 PM AEST
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what joy the wonderful globe permits us. lovely write, looking forward to more..
Exquisite writing that is your gift, be blessed, for you are perfection.
~Ash |
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by Archie on
Wednesday, 21st September 2005 @ 10:20:21 PM AEST
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| I like this very much. This is a very good dedication poem. |
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Re: Moon Child...
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 22nd September 2005 @ 08:17:15 PM AEST
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Oh my Sue:]
What did I find here, my treasure of all treasures, where my Sweet Lord is present to me, yes, the Moon, where I focus on Him and you.
I sit outside on the deck in my chair high on my hill, each night, rain, windy, snowy, ice, does not matter, listening to the frogs and the crickets, and I view this small far away little planet, surrounded by each little star, my loves ones, His eyes twinkling back at us, A moon so far away, yet close, as He is to us.
Yes, crazy as it may seem, I find all of you there with me, loving my little heart out. If you only knew my mind. It is that bright shining light that hangs over our heads, one gigantic blessing that moves us all toward each other.
Yes big and bright to us as we all look on into the face of His glowing light, our reflection, yet in all reality smaller than us, the moon.
Yes the moon is smaller than our earth, yet it attracts a lot of us, moves us, its powerful.
Perhaps it was meant to be that way, (for me anyway in my silly thinking) hear me what I say, it is a Light that shines bright in my heart, let it shine in yours.
For me, it reminds me each night of how much I do love Him, and our great planet here with all of His sweet children, in order to keep us all bright happy and close.
This write has me in happy tears, for you hit my soul hard with joy. Yes, each night I do have this ritual, have as far back as I can remember, this is my place where I pray and rejoice. I dance on that moon every night, with Him, and its a good thing I have a deep and sensitive will, highly passionate imagination, in that Light, when on those certain nights I am lost when the moon cannot be seen, yet it is there, and so is He. If you only knew what I go through when it is not available for my eyes. Again, it is there, for He is always there.
Thank you for this powerful write here, and I love you all YPDC, Sue.. I love you, and I would be lost without all of you. Just know I pray no matter what, and until my last breath I will always remind in my little small ways in my writes, hidden messages of our Dear Sweet Lord. My Moon. Sue, I am just gleaming with joy, as how you can figure me out, as well as several here at YPDC. Its all written, spilled over deeply in my writes. Read deep, that is where you will find me and our Lord, ever present here and in me and you.
I want to thank all of my faithful readers here this day and all days, as I sit here loving you all so very much. I have much love for all. Thank you for loving me back.
Huggies,
Raquel Leah :D |
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Re: Moon Child...
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by SPSM on
Thursday, 29th September 2005 @ 07:18:30 AM AEST
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| How beautiful. You are a very talented writer. |
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by Wachumiri on
Wednesday, 5th October 2005 @ 07:48:13 AM AEST
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A beautiful and loving, as well as well written, piece. May your nights be lit by moon, your days by her child.
Take care.
David |
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Re: Moon Child...
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by emystar on
Friday, 9th December 2005 @ 05:25:06 AM AEST
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A masterpeice 4 a beautifull person that's very deserving.
luv, big huggs, mucho smiles,
emy |
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Re: Moon Child...
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by Elizabeth_Dandy on
Friday, 13th January 2006 @ 09:11:45 AM AEST
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Ah dear Sue!
What a beautiful tribute to a bubbling spring of faith - under the shimmering moon.!
Freshets always work their charm best under the moon :-).
Sweet and loving t ribute to your so very deserved poet f riend.
Thanks for sharing
Hugs
Elizabeth |
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Re: Moon Child...
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by yangdantien on
Thursday, 29th March 2007 @ 10:19:51 PM AEST
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Brilliant reach O Infinite&Eternal_Dreamer
A most personal homage but applies universally to all of us moon children.
Bravo
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