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The OTHER SIDE, Part 1
Contributed by
LOWMAN613
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Friday, 17th January 2003 @ 10:00:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
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I'm Communicating with my Spirital Guide,
I cant believe what shes telling me,
Talking about the place called"The Otherside"
a place I would love to see,
I asked her is it filled with beauty beyond explaination,
She said it's more beautiful than your imagination,
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The air is cleaner,the colors are brighter,
The trees are greener,the flowers are more beautiful,
The skies are bluer,and the whites are whiter,
The animals are tamer and more playful,
Life over there is much like it is here,
with out the pain and hate,
Theres nothing you wont fear,
and theres much that you can create,
We love all of the souls creation,
because they're much like we are,
There is no need for competition,
Were all Gods equal star,
The world around us is so pleasently comfortable,
At 72* not to hot or cold,
It allows us to dress a little more flexable,
we have the power to mold,
With no sun,but a rose-hued light,
that amplifies beauty,
There is no darkness or night,
for sleeping is not a duty.
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To be CONT.
Copyright ©
LOWMAN613
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2003-01-17 22:00:00]
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Re: The OTHER SIDE, Part 1
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by Rakerman1999 on
Friday, 17th January 2003 @ 10:09:31 PM AEST
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| Wow Cristina...this is so beautiful so far , I can't wait till part 2! Great write ! |
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Re: The OTHER SIDE, Part 1
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by OreO on
Saturday, 18th January 2003 @ 04:19:54 AM AEST
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Wow what a way to describe the other side.......im going to read part 2 now...this was awesome Christina thanks for sharing it....love this..
.:*~*:.OreO.:*~*:. |
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Re: The OTHER SIDE, Part 1
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by Ilhar on
Saturday, 18th January 2003 @ 06:59:33 PM AEST
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beautiful...
Sharon |
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Re: The OTHER SIDE, Part 1
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 28th January 2003 @ 04:33:32 PM AEST
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I liked both peices they really make you think about Heaven!
~ Heaven angel~ |
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Re: The OTHER SIDE, Part 1
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by Archie on
Saturday, 1st May 2004 @ 08:35:12 PM AEST
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| Your rhyming is very good, as well as the discriptions of how people treat one another. |
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