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Is This The End?
Contributed by
shattered_soul
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Wednesday, 21st September 2005 @ 04:00:20 PM in AEST
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Looking down I see a puddle
darkest, deepest red.
Noticing at once that bloods
made from my own hand.
I squeeze the blade
tightly in my grasp.
Every time I use you
Its one more then the last.
I sit there with my eyes closed tight
wonderment spreads across my face.
Will this be the last cut I make?
Is this the last breath I take?
Is this going to be the end?
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2005-09-21 16:00:20]
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Re: Is This The End?
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by DesolantDreamer on
Wednesday, 21st September 2005 @ 04:24:46 PM AEST
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A very deep write. Full of power and wonder. Questions always fill the reader up with understanding. Excellent, but you should work at editing. (I shouldn't be one to talk but I have an excuse since i'm in Japan and know not lot of english.
But it is still a very very good write. Keep up the good work!
~*~Tsubaki~*~ |
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Re: Is This The End?
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by Archie on
Wednesday, 21st September 2005 @ 04:31:39 PM AEST
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I hope not. ( in answer to your question)
I hope to read many bueatiful poems by you of joy and happiness. |
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