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Pray
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WAE
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Wednesday, 21st September 2005 @ 02:12:29 PM in AEST
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My Lord,
You gave me more than I could ever wish.
How can I pay you back
For You don't need a thing from me but faith?
I knee and cry,
I pray and sing through tears of joy.
In hope my song will reach You.
I do my my best but still
My words are sand in desert:
So many yet too simple.
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Re: Pray
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by lostrelic on
Wednesday, 21st September 2005 @ 02:24:54 PM AEST
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lovely prayer interesting place to put it
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Re: Pray
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by remote on
Wednesday, 21st September 2005 @ 03:06:24 PM AEST
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"My words are sand in desert:
So many yet too simple."
These two lines are plain brilliant, I couldn't care much for the rest of it though. |
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Re: Pray
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Wednesday, 21st September 2005 @ 06:10:33 PM AEST
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Alex this is so beautifully written. Short, simple and heart touching. Well done.
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Re: Pray
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by kcampbell on
Wednesday, 21st September 2005 @ 06:22:44 PM AEST
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I think it's supposed to say kneel isn't it? I like it though. And in my poem, I was writing meaning good as in perfect, see, a lot of ppl see me as "perfect" and I am by no means anything close to that. Without Christ, I could do Nothing good. Thanks for the comments!
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Re: Pray
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by Fionndruinne on
Wednesday, 21st September 2005 @ 11:31:43 PM AEST
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Eloquent in its brevity, inspiring and well said!
The first line of the third stanza should be "I kneel and cry", I think (typo?).
I feel the last stanza often.
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Re: Pray
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by WAE on
Thursday, 22nd September 2005 @ 04:17:03 PM AEST
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I am sorry for the typo - kneel should be it...
Sorry,
Alex |
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