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Warrior
Contributed by
Jax1130
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Wednesday, 21st September 2005 @ 02:06:53 PM in AEST
Topic:
spiritual
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The mighty warrior goes into battle with strength and honour, it is not strength if the sword but strength of the heart that
drives him and then he returns home with sweetness. He seeks light that he is granted not darkness that he is spared, because he is not a warrior but merely a man. Like mighty oak in a storm snaps but weeping willow bends to see the sun smile.
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Re: Warrior
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by lostrelic on
Wednesday, 21st September 2005 @ 02:26:43 PM AEST
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well we should all walk with our swords and sheilds held close in times like these you need all the strenght
cool write
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Re: Warrior
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 21st September 2005 @ 07:55:50 PM AEST
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| Very good write. |
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Re: Warrior
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by Fionndruinne on
Wednesday, 21st September 2005 @ 11:28:48 PM AEST
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Inspiring words! I would like them better, though, in verse rather than prose. But even so, I like and identify with them.
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Re: Warrior
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by europeanprincess on
Sunday, 9th July 2006 @ 08:27:39 AM AEST
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| this was pretty good. it almost seems as though you had more to put into it. do you want to? you wrote down words that are very true of a boy becoming a man--a warrior. thank you for sharing |
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