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to cut me
Contributed by
judasman
on
Wednesday, 21st September 2005 @ 01:58:28 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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all was lost when you went away
left me broken hurting inside
a million questions tumble through my mind
i remember the night we met
how i felt when you first cut me
but now you're gone away from me
i cut myself to try and remember
there can never be another you
i stroke her face and think of you
when i cut her it doesn't feel the same
i cut her and i cut her again and again
she lay lifeless at my feet
and still i think of you and wish that you were here
to cut me
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2005-09-21 13:58:28]
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Re: to cut me
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by maestar on
Wednesday, 21st September 2005 @ 02:08:25 PM AEST
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Great write.
I think its very unlikely this is true and/or about you. so very good. |
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Re: to cut me
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by DesolantDreamer on
Wednesday, 21st September 2005 @ 02:50:33 PM AEST
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A sweet and painful write full of sorrow and love. here is a quote from Budha that helped me when I lost someone, maybe it will help too:
The lotus flower blooms in the mud.
~*~We are the bleeding clouds, and from the seas of blood we have come. We are witnesses, and we are a sign of peace to you~*~ Tsubaki |
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Re: to cut me
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by Scarletrayne on
Wednesday, 21st September 2005 @ 08:10:06 PM AEST
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| Interesting, I enjoyed reading it. |
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