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From God
Contributed by
maestar
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Wednesday, 21st September 2005 @ 08:26:46 AM in AEST
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Do you listen to me when I tell you my fears
Do you see when I shed salted tears.
Do you care when I thank you for food you supply
or ask for forgiveness for a long spoken lie.
When I go to sleep do you make shore I wake
Do you hate me and judge me for the liberteys I take.
I ask you this now in an over due prayer
see I've umed and I've ard over weather you're there.
Then I heard in a dream something beautifully said
And I felt something golden shineing over my head.
An angel had come with a message from you
"Every thing you want me to do,
Is thoughtfuly loveingly undoudtedly true"
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Re: From God
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by Archie on
Wednesday, 21st September 2005 @ 08:35:25 AM AEST
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This is a very good poem. The second line of the 4th stanza is incomplete. I think you meant to say something else.
"see I've umed and I've ard over weather you're there"
I'm not sure what you intended by the above line but I think that's not it. |
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Re: From God
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by MorningDove on
Wednesday, 21st September 2005 @ 03:03:27 PM AEST
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Our heavenly Father loves us in spite of any sin or indiscretion we may have committed. That is why his son died on the cross for our sins, those of that day and any sins to come in the life of mankind.
blessings,
Rita |
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Re: From God
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by Manda2 on
Thursday, 22nd September 2005 @ 04:22:58 PM AEST
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| A brilliant poem maestar, I love the way you write. |
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Re: From God
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by Archie on
Thursday, 6th October 2005 @ 11:52:38 PM AEST
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This is a great poem.
"You will seek me and find me when you seek with all of your heart . . . declares the Lord" Jerimiah 29: 11- 13 excerpt |
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