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Candy
Contributed by
maestar
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Wednesday, 21st September 2005 @ 08:16:59 AM in AEST
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When we argue I lash out cos I dont want you to win
but frankely Candy being with you is so good it should be a sin.
I'm so proud of you for starting college and being so smart
and Candy, every thing you do is a form of art.
when you leave I miss you and want you back.
and candy, you're so perfect there's nothing you lack.
now i know that next time we fight I'll say that you stink
just to scratch and bite.
but if I'm being honest
and telling you no lies
you smell like spring roses
and you're easy on the eyes
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2005-09-21 08:16:59]
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Re: Candy
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by JenJen on
Wednesday, 21st September 2005 @ 09:16:30 AM AEST
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a very nice poem i think you should show candy this poem maybe you will not fight as much but thats just my opinion
gd luck
jenni
xxx |
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Re: Candy
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by bubbletoes on
Wednesday, 21st September 2005 @ 10:18:38 AM AEST
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| its a good write i think you could have used the word and a little less,..unless that was the way it was meant to be but it was weet,..and i agree if yur fighting show her the poem,..girls are sappy,..i mean umm she might like like it,..im sure youd fight less or just laugh when you started again because of the poem,.good write keep it up |
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Re: Candy
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by moon_light on
Wednesday, 21st September 2005 @ 10:21:21 AM AEST
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i agree you should show her the poem. if you realy dont whant to mabie you should leave it where she can find it.
moonlite |
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Re: Candy
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by judasman on
Wednesday, 21st September 2005 @ 02:05:28 PM AEST
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| you need to open up my friend i think if candy saw this they'd be well impressed |
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Re: Candy
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by Manda2 on
Thursday, 22nd September 2005 @ 04:27:38 PM AEST
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| maestar, this is a wonderful tribute to your sister, I know she loves you very much too. Well done, brilliant write. (By the way, I read it to her!) |
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Re: Candy
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by Archie on
Tuesday, 11th October 2005 @ 08:20:24 PM AEST
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I hate to say it but you had me laughing through the entire poem from the first line. I don't know if that was intent.
You have a way with words. I hope things go well for the both of you. |
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Re: Candy
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by Candice on
Wednesday, 21st December 2005 @ 08:42:54 AM AEST
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Hi sweety
It's Candy and that was truly touching.
You don't need to tell me thow. I know I'm easy on the eyes!
Cheers me Deers! for the tribute it's the nicest thing anybody's ever done for me.
Love ya x |
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