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Goodbye in advance

Contributed by hearts4pain on Tuesday, 20th September 2005 @ 09:16:12 PM in AEST
Topic: goodbyepoetry

my grip slips, i lose control
i had a bad feeling about this
bury my head into your shoulder
hoping you dont feel me tremble
it hurts to see you smile
because i know i got it bad

just as fast as you came
there you go
dreading the days left
trying to get over you now
so it wont be so hard to breath
when you leave

give me a reason to hate you
use me, break me
help me forget
lets make this ending something
something i wont regret

i already miss you and your still here
you look me in the eyes
cant you see me hurt?
your kiss peirces my heart
no use trying to explain
these thoughts tearing me apart
for sure im in love tonight

dont give me another amazing night
another breath taking moment
dont give me another long hug
another sweet kiss
your making this harder
cuz your taking my heart
please dont take my heart
dont take it when you go

give me a reason to hate you
use me, break me
help me forget
lets make this ending something
something i wont regret

i remember every memory we've made
im starting to think this was a mistake
i bite my tongue to stop thinking
i deny that i love you
but hey it helps me forget
it helps me to forget

so give me a reason to hate you
use me and break me
help me forget (i must forget)
im trying to make this ending
(this ending) something
something we wont regret

so give me, (give me)a reason to hate you
use me(use me) and break me (break me)
help me forget (i must forget)
im trying to make this ending
(this ending) this ending something
something we wont regret

getting closer to the end
lets just get this goodbye over with
ive already made up my mind
i guess this is goodbye in advance...

Copyright © hearts4pain ... [ 2005-09-20 21:16:12]
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Re: Goodbye in advance (User Rating: 1 )
by mjh0813 on Wednesday, 21st September 2005 @ 09:52:38 AM AEST
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its hard to deny you love someone when you know you love them.....but hey this was a good wirte keep it up
peace and love
meg

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