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depressed
Contributed by
trini
on
Tuesday, 20th September 2005 @ 09:09:21 PM in AEST
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EmotionalPoetry
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Cradle your face
Today is your day
Die in disgrace
To the heavens of gray
We’ve broken the seven
Deep and down we go
No grasp of heaven
No chance it will show
And we all fall down
To the cold deep
It’s too easy to drown
So many secrets to keep
We’ve taken our shots to the back of the head
Covered the floor in this pitiful red
Slowly beating this heart of lead
But why does it matter, I'm already dead
Copyright ©
trini
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2005-09-20 21:09:21]
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Re: depressed
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by Shattered_soul on
Tuesday, 20th September 2005 @ 11:51:31 PM AEST
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That was so sad, I liked it... keep up the great writing.
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Re: depressed
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by deathbringer on
Monday, 21st November 2005 @ 05:59:31 AM AEST
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| An enjoyable read(even though everything 'bout death seems enjoyable to me).You could try and improve you rythm but it's a very good poem that is worth reading.Good work. |
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