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Answer me
Contributed by
anitajames
on
Tuesday, 20th September 2005 @ 05:37:04 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Can you hear what I'm not saying
when I look at you with heavy eyes?
Is this vacuum really empty?
Try to sneak around my pride.
Do you get what hides inside?
Glistening tendrils of shame exuding
pointing fingers full of blame.
Crimson seas alert and churning
No, I didn't forget your name.
Silent stutters keep repeating
tell me, do you hear my pain?
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anitajames
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2005-09-20 17:37:04] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Answer me
(User Rating: 1 ) by Wachumiri on
Monday, 3rd October 2005 @ 07:45:46 AM AEST (User
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Really emotional. I really like the last line...
"Do you hear my pain"
Deep pain can be heard all to clear.
Take care.
David |
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