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make me fly
Contributed by
xXxmegsxXx
on
Tuesday, 20th September 2005 @ 03:37:51 PM in AEST
Topic:
fantasy
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take me away
make me sleep
make me fall
into slumber so deep
take me to a land
far, far away
which exists by night
and dissapears at day
where just like a bird
i can fly high
and reach the stars
in the night sky
i want to be free
i want to soar
o how i wish i could stay
here forever more
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xXxmegsxXx
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2005-09-20 15:37:51]
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Re: make me fly
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by JenJen on
Tuesday, 20th September 2005 @ 04:31:48 PM AEST
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| i reli like dis one megs well done |
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Re: make me fly
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by shortcut on
Tuesday, 20th September 2005 @ 11:36:04 PM AEST
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This is simple, flows smoothly and makes me want to go off to dreamland as well. :)
Nice job! |
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Re: make me fly
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by remote on
Wednesday, 21st September 2005 @ 09:41:16 AM AEST
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| Loved this, very well written. |
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Re: make me fly
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 21st September 2005 @ 11:42:23 AM AEST
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| I like this a lot. It has a great flow to it. |
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Re: make me fly
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 22nd September 2005 @ 10:40:08 PM AEST
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| Short, sweet, and simple. A wonderful write. :-) |
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