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What I needed is what I need

Contributed by MajesticPoet on Tuesday, 20th September 2005 @ 03:29:25 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

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A picture paints a thousand words in silence
But it never really seems to capture life
It holds the past of my mistakes
Takes the innocence away and reminds me

What I needed was a little less saving
A little pull on my heart strings maybe
What I needed was the same thing I need now - It's what I need

I've pulled my weight for all this time - Now I'm breaking down
I feel so faceless in the crowd - Just another Johnny come lately
I wear my heart upon my sleeve and that default is giving me away

Sometimes I feel like I'm Deviated
The more I try in this world that I created
A trouble mind I find it hard to believe in
Make it right I've lost time and sense of felling
I think I - Cause I think I
I think I'm falling down

20 pieces on the ground
Pick me up dust me off so sweetly
Give me time to figure out completely
My life ahead a road that I must travel
Bring it back or watch my world unravel

I see you're struggeling
So what's your story
I think you're beautiful

You'll give yourself away
And get back nothing
I'll give myself to you if you'll give yourself to me

I see you're waking up and that shows promise
I see inside of you it's just like me
What I needed was the same thing I need now - It's what I need

Copyright © MajesticPoet ... [ 2005-09-20 15:29:25]
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Re: What I needed is what I need (User Rating: 1 )
by europeanprincess on Sunday, 9th July 2006 @ 09:37:35 AM AEST
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you had me on top but then i was lost. the poem sarted out great andi was intrigued, but when i got to the end it sort of fell. my favorite lines:

Sometimes I feel like I'm Deviated
The more I try in this world that I created
A trouble mind I find it hard to believe in
Make it right I've lost time and sense of feeling

thank you for sharing.

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