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Do you Know????
Contributed by
sbhottie288
on
Tuesday, 20th September 2005 @ 01:15:33 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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Do you know what it feels like
To hold that blade every night
Just hoping and praying
You just do it right
When you feel like you cant go on
And you feel like everything you have done is wrong
Just to wish you wont see another dawn
But you try to be strong
What happens when the strength goes away
And then your light starts to fade
When the night seems meaner then ever
And sometimes you wish its forever
Some people call me a psycho
And others think im dumb
But what happens when everything you feel
Finally becomes numb
I tried to be happy
For you all to see
But that happiness has faded
Along with me
I have the pills in one hand
And the knife in the other
And now I start to fall
Just like every other weak sucker
Weak for giving into the fright
For giving into the night
This is just one thing I don’t want to fight
And I want to make everything right
But the time is to late
Because my past has sucked
I don’t know when will be the date
But if I keep going like this it will be fate
Copyright ©
sbhottie288
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2005-09-20 13:15:33]
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Re: Do you Know????
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by shortcut on
Tuesday, 20th September 2005 @ 01:55:23 PM AEST
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| Good writing, its good to write it all down, think of as a way of getting the poison out of a snake bite And you can picture your ex as the snake:) Been down as low as you before, through a divorce. But trust me, hang in there, life will get better. |
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Re: Do you Know????
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by lostrelic on
Tuesday, 20th September 2005 @ 02:04:20 PM AEST
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ive felt that way all my life and i also have found poetry is a great way to vent your feelings but beware if you feel that way one day you might just get fed up i did but i survived just remember keep writing its great on the soul
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