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Beach
Contributed by
bubbletoes
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Tuesday, 20th September 2005 @ 12:27:41 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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Sand and wiches crunch in your mouth
Glass beads of broken bottles
Dulled down and washed ashore,..
In my pocket i save them, To look at on sad and rainy days
Blue, green and brown
Your feet sink deep
Wait for the sunset and kiss till the sunrise
Tequlia body shots, Corona's and limes
Sun hurts, love burns
White sands, Tropical birds
Tanned whispers and grass skirts,..
Wait for the sunrise and kiss till the sunset
Tequlia body shots, Corona's and limes
Salt-water tears, come from happiness
Waves of sunshine of which i take pictures
Ice cubes made from coconuts,.
Scorching dry heat,
No matter how hard i try,
The coconut ice cubes,
Cannot freeze this moment in time
Wait for the sunset,..
Kiss till the sunrise,..
Tequila body shots,..
Coronas and limes,..
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2005-09-20 12:27:41]
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Re: Beach
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by WAE on
Tuesday, 20th September 2005 @ 02:11:53 PM AEST
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Sounds like the beach I live next to... I don't have to keep bits of broken glass - I' ve got them right behind the walls...
Nice picture...
Good luck,
Alex |
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Re: Beach
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by xxbreathlessx on
Wednesday, 21st September 2005 @ 09:43:30 PM AEST
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| i loved the whole thing. the repitition was genius and the details were beautiful. amazing job. |
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Re: Beach
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by Elayner27 on
Friday, 23rd September 2005 @ 09:22:52 PM AEST
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The imagery is awesome. Reminds me of my trips to mexico. I love the first line, it's crazy. I love how it's almost like a song with the repetative. Very preaty write. I'm going to read more from you. I like them. You are a good writer.
Elayna
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