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Here's your chance, What I believe
Contributed by
Archie
on
Tuesday, 20th September 2005 @ 09:24:09 AM in AEST
Topic:
ChristianPoetry
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I believe there is a God
and I believe he had a son
and he walked upon the face of the earth
I believ that those he sought
were looking for someone else
and they were not able to see his love
Caught up in traditions
They lost their heart of love
and followed rules by men
God had to write new rules
and change his convenant
so that man could change
I believ he chose 12 men
and he taught them his new ways
from the models that were given by the ancients
Those religious did not like
all the things he had to say
they plotted a cunning way to kill him
All was going according to scripture
played out like an act within a play
those who he came to help hung him on a cross one day
They did it to keep their honour
they did it in jealousy
And here I stand to tell the same to you
and that's what I believe
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Go on and take your pot shots
tell me what you believe
tell me of how wrong I am
and how i can not see
Tell me Jesus is a crutch
only for the weak
I can take your persecution
and it proves that i can see
I see men stealing and killing out of greed
I see foolish argruments instead of conversations deep
I have tried hard to say what i believe in peace
But some have not been the same way
there judgements never cease
Go on and take your pot shots
tell me how Jesus' a hoax
thought up to take the people's money
Tell me how you believe the world is supposed to be
I'm giving you your chance now
I really want to see
Show me by your argruments
how God's word is incomplete
and I'll show you by my actions
why I've come to believe
Here is your chance to show
who you are and what you believe
Tell me why you think that
the bible deceives
( I showed what I believe )
Copyright ©
Archie
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2005-09-20 09:24:09]
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Re: Here's your chance, What I believe
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by igba on
Tuesday, 20th September 2005 @ 09:56:06 AM AEST
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| simply outstanding |
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Re: Here's your chance, What I believe
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by maestar on
Wednesday, 21st September 2005 @ 08:37:30 AM AEST
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Great write.
thank you for the comment on mine.
you are write I messed up on the last bit. lol. |
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Re: Here's your chance, What I believe
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by maestar on
Wednesday, 21st September 2005 @ 09:03:52 AM AEST
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I do beleive in every thing in this poem .
its complete truth |
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Re: Here's your chance, What I believe
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by Jeff_Scott_Morehead on
Wednesday, 21st September 2005 @ 09:16:01 AM AEST
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So very well written...
Excellent from start to finish
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Re: Here's your chance, What I believe
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by inoc on
Friday, 30th September 2005 @ 08:24:05 AM AEST
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My beliefs are simular....I also believe what is written in that precious bible...that not many people 'bother to read' but it is our instruction manual...for human beings...and if no one reads that we probably arn't using our bodies like God planned...
bravo to you Archie I think you are brilliant
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