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Opposites
Contributed by
black_star
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Tuesday, 20th September 2005 @ 07:27:52 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Once upon a midnight dream,
The moon can touch the sun,
The cattle bark,
The fish can sing,
The prisoner’s on the run.
And as I watch the wingless fly,
The non-existent came,
The sea is blue,
And so’s the sky,
So switch them – they’re the same.
I flew up to the bottom,
The desert had a flood,
The lost is found,
The Earth is square,
The soap is made from mud.
As I drew down to the castle,
The workers had the crown,
The trumpets sucked,
The flags, they walked,
The jester wore a frown.
So back into the future,
There’s noise but there’s no sound,
The Earth is set,
The way it is,
Confusion won’t be found.
Copyright ©
black_star
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2005-09-20 07:27:52]
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Re: Opposites
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by Rxqueen on
Tuesday, 20th September 2005 @ 09:05:14 AM AEST
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| Very creative and imaginative. I liked this, entertaining... Great job. I could never have had the mind to think of something like this, thanks for sharing such a unique peice. XOXO |
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Re: Opposites
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by WAE on
Tuesday, 20th September 2005 @ 02:16:10 PM AEST
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Nice. Makes me think of Lewis Carrol poems...
Good Luck
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Re: Opposites
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by Fionndruinne on
Wednesday, 21st September 2005 @ 02:22:11 AM AEST
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Very interesting! Creative and well written. I enjoyed it.
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