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My Broken Heart
Contributed by
faith4reelz
on
Tuesday, 20th September 2005 @ 02:32:35 AM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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Shattered lying in a pool of blood
no sign of life can be found.
I do what I can to try and revive it
as it lies in pieces on the ground.
There's no staple or stitch strong enough
to put my heart back in too.
You can try and pick up the pieces
but it's broken because of you.
Each phase in life brings a broken heart
though they never hurt quite the same.
I've never felt a pain like this before
and you are the one to blame.
I hear the echoes of your promises
bouncing off the walls of my heart.
Maybe betrayal is what actually hurt it
when you ripped my insides apart.
When a love is strong and promising
and forever willing to be around...
Why would you rip out a barely mended heart
and then stomp it to the ground?
Copyright ©
faith4reelz
... [
2005-09-20 02:32:35]
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Re: My Broken Heart
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 20th September 2005 @ 03:05:08 AM AEST
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| I've felt this pain too many times before. This is a great first write you have here. I look forward to reading more from you! :-) |
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Re: My Broken Heart
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by Wachumiri on
Tuesday, 20th September 2005 @ 04:53:23 AM AEST
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Welcome to YPDC!
Well written piece. I really like many of your word phrases. Good job.
Take care, and again, welcome.
David |
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Re: My Broken Heart
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by Rxqueen on
Tuesday, 20th September 2005 @ 09:21:15 AM AEST
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| There's nothing like the pain of a broken heart... Nice write. Like the part about the sticthes and staples. XOXO |
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Re: My Broken Heart
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by mjh0813 on
Tuesday, 20th September 2005 @ 09:35:54 AM AEST
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wow this was really good..i can relate to how you feel b/c ive been there...i know its hard but hey at least now you can find someone better
peace and love
*~meg*~ |
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Re: My Broken Heart
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by eternal_sorrows on
Saturday, 24th September 2005 @ 10:27:05 AM AEST
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Very well written and raw emotions of the heart.
I wish you a gentle healing.
ES |
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