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About to break..
Contributed by
Lollypopxcore
on
Monday, 19th September 2005 @ 11:27:46 PM in AEST
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And Im giving up because it hurts so bad
I can't tell anyone about the day i had
I can't find it in myself to forget him.
I can't pretend to smile anymore
this has to stop.
i have to accept this
This is real, and so is the pain.
No one can ever feel the same about me
because I am nothing special
and Im not who they want me to be.
And I'm sorry
If I could change myself-
I would.
I can feel the tears tensing up in my eyes.
I can feel it burning while it mixes with my eyeliner.
It stings, but I can be strong about it.
Copyright ©
Lollypopxcore
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2005-09-19 23:27:46]
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Re: About to break..
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by The_Callif on
Monday, 19th September 2005 @ 11:56:27 PM AEST
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great poem
i hope to see some more of your work on the site
keep up the good work
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Re: About to break..
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by coolbreeze17 on
Tuesday, 20th September 2005 @ 12:42:13 AM AEST
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really like.....
;cb |
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Re: About to break..
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by sick_n_twisted on
Tuesday, 20th September 2005 @ 01:12:17 AM AEST
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awww......im sorry about that but im sure u are special and theres more guys out there and you'll find one that loves u and i hope your happy....great write i really liked it...
Dee,. |
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Re: About to break..
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by Archie on
Tuesday, 20th September 2005 @ 01:50:40 AM AEST
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Great poem
"I know you
don't know what I'm going through
standing here looking at you"
Quote from "Hurt so bad" by Little Anthony and the Imperials |
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Re: About to break..
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by remote on
Tuesday, 20th September 2005 @ 09:33:32 AM AEST
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| Each heart break just seems like the end of world, you soon realise that it is not...when the next one comes along. |
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