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Anything
Contributed by
Pianoman745
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Monday, 19th September 2005 @ 09:43:09 PM in AEST
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Why not give me something to live for?
something to die for
something to look forward to
Say something to make me happy.
something cruel
something, maybe a secret
Give me something I can hold.
something that hurts
something real
Do something for me.
something I’ll appreciate
something I might forget
Remember me for something.
something good
something bad
anything…
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Pianoman745
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2005-09-19 21:43:09]
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Re: Anything
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 19th September 2005 @ 10:45:24 PM AEST
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Strong write. I know exactly how you feel. Love the lines:
"Remember me for something.
something good
something bad
anything...."
Those lines hit close to home for me. Thanks for sharing and hopefully everything will work out for you. |
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Re: Anything
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by Archie on
Tuesday, 20th September 2005 @ 01:53:11 AM AEST
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| Great poem. I think you express a lot of emotion here. and i hope the person it is directed toward is worthy of it. |
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Re: Anything
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by WAE on
Tuesday, 20th September 2005 @ 09:20:58 AM AEST
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Nice writing... I can hear your point clearly...
Best of luck,
Alex |
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