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My World
Contributed by
Writting_Fever
on
Monday, 19th September 2005 @ 08:14:07 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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My little world,
Is so very strong,
It keeps me together,
When I feel like I don't belong,
In my world,
I'm loved every day,
There's nothing cruel,
Or mean to say,
My world, to me,
Is my pride and joy,
There's no fighting between,
A girl and a boy,
My world is perfect,
No sadness is the key,
It comes with a smile,
A mile away could be seen,
I love my world,
And between you and me,
It's my everything,
It's you, you're my world, to me.
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Writting_Fever
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2005-09-19 20:14:07]
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Re: My World
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by Scarletrayne on
Monday, 19th September 2005 @ 08:57:56 PM AEST
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| Great write. |
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Re: My World
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by Man_On_High on
Monday, 19th September 2005 @ 09:41:55 PM AEST
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Heartfelt..
Your happiness is very eveident-
Much more to you..
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Re: My World
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 20th September 2005 @ 12:14:54 AM AEST
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A most beautiful peice of romantic poetry but even better you paint a very hopeful scenario
if only the whole world were like this, but your world is a good place 2 start, very lovely in deed . . .
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Re: My World
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by sick_n_twisted on
Tuesday, 20th September 2005 @ 01:09:09 AM AEST
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| nice poem i wish my world was like that haha great write |
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