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UNUSUAL FUNERAL
Contributed by
GINA
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Friday, 17th January 2003 @ 06:00:00 PM in AEST
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Walking in this night,afraid i'm not
Seeking the cemeteries for a perfect spot
Deeper and deeper digging in the land
extending a room for i call "grand "
Surrounded by flowers i placed it down there
Young....innocent....but who really care?!
Silence overwhelming as i say goodbye
Frozen emotions,not a tear in my eye
I'm not happy..not sad..not angry..not dread
i can't feel anymore because it's dead
Now that you killed this troublemaker part
I can live like you...i buried my Heart
Copyright ©
GINA
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2003-01-17 18:00:00]
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Re: UNUSUAL FUNERAL
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by LOWMAN613 on
Friday, 17th January 2003 @ 06:03:07 PM AEST
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| Gina this was a really deep poem,but so full of feeling.I liked this,Christina |
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Re: UNUSUAL FUNERAL
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by OreO on
Saturday, 18th January 2003 @ 02:51:04 AM AEST
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Aww gina my friend this is so sad....your so happy spirited to...i hope this isnt part of anything goin on in your life girl....if it is my heart is right there with you....good write gina....
.:*~*:.OreO.:*~*:. |
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Re: UNUSUAL FUNERAL
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by ALIEN on
Saturday, 18th January 2003 @ 08:37:46 AM AEST
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| That was so deep..U touched my hurt..but cheer up coz i ll give life to ur heart again very soon... |
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Re: UNUSUAL FUNERAL
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by Opium on
Saturday, 18th January 2003 @ 11:01:52 AM AEST
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| I think I'll go and digg it up, I told you a million time that I want it when you're done with it |
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Re: UNUSUAL FUNERAL
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by roisin on
Saturday, 18th January 2003 @ 07:35:30 PM AEST
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An exceptional write....we've all buried our hearts at one time or another...trick is to remember where's it's buried when it's time to dig it up again...
thank you
rosie |
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Re: UNUSUAL FUNERAL
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 21st January 2003 @ 03:48:19 PM AEST
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| hey u girl ur poems r perfect,i have to ask u a favor: can u make me a poem in the occasion of my friend's birthday. |
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Re: UNUSUAL FUNERAL
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by Silent-Cry on
Monday, 21st April 2003 @ 12:43:26 PM AEST
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| this is a perfect poem,simply,truely. |
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