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Real Life
Contributed by
allowanceofthoughts
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Monday, 19th September 2005 @ 07:44:34 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Babies crying
Mother dying
No more food
In the street she stood
Homeless nights
Spousal fights
Drive by shooting
A city of looting
This is where I live
Something soon has got to give
Loving arms
Holiday charm
Time for a beautiful life
No more guns, no more strife
Unexpected laughing
Uncontrolled loving
Only in a dream, can this come true
That’s reality and there is nothing anyone can do
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2005-09-19 19:44:34]
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Re: Real Life
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by Archie on
Monday, 19th September 2005 @ 08:06:39 PM AEST
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Your words are very similar to a song i wrote called "Here we go again"
I like this a lot.
I escaped the innercity many years ago but know that people still exist in that way of life. Maybe one day it will change. |
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Re: Real Life
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by Jen54 on
Wednesday, 28th September 2005 @ 01:47:41 PM AEST
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| what a truthful poem. I like it. Great job. |
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