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Breakup Dilemma
Contributed by
Kie-Kie
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Monday, 19th September 2005 @ 07:29:42 PM in AEST
Topic:
goodbyepoetry
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Couldn't you have kept it simple?
Made it easy on me?
Did you have to become a gentleman?
Did you have to call and see?
Why did you change now?
I'd already made up my mind
And now it's ging to be hard
I'm in a terrible bind
You see I'm not in love
And that's why I cannot stay
But you became a better man
In the day I was away
If you hadn't picked up that phone
To call and just check up
I might not feel so bad
That I want to breakup
I'm sorry I've made up my mind
And I won't let my thoughts stray
I'm sure you'll find someone better
Who won't run away
Copyright ©
Kie-Kie
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2005-09-19 19:29:42]
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Re: Breakup Dilemma
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by allowanceofthoughts on
Monday, 19th September 2005 @ 07:40:35 PM AEST
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| That was really good. I loved the questions at the beginning, because of how true they are. |
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Re: Breakup Dilemma
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by UnlovedChild on
Monday, 19th September 2005 @ 07:40:51 PM AEST
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| Aww it's such a lovely poem. I love it! |
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Re: Breakup Dilemma
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by Mild_Tempest on
Monday, 19th September 2005 @ 07:45:35 PM AEST
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| Utterly amazing, wonderful write. Keep it up |
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Re: Breakup Dilemma
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 20th September 2005 @ 12:29:14 AM AEST
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A beautiful flow and beautiful yet sad poem ,
of a most delicate subject though prtrayed very well . . .
(((((Kie-Kie))))
Ben |
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Re: Breakup Dilemma
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by LOWMAN613 on
Tuesday, 20th September 2005 @ 09:33:06 PM AEST
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| Breakups are never easy anyway but I know what you mean here! So very sorry for this chin up & move on! Christina |
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Re: Breakup Dilemma
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 27th September 2005 @ 12:31:45 AM AEST
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Effective dialogue of conflict, contact
Important self-awareness
The mental struggle is hard after a breakup, it seems incompatibility won out, your needs must be met in other ways..
great write, ty
Raquel Leah |
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