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Peace of Mind
Contributed by
Channing
on
Monday, 19th September 2005 @ 06:44:55 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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I wipe the tears
From my face they fall
The end nears
No longer shall I stall
Death takes no holiday
I’ve caused much corruption
Now I stand ready to pay
For I’m sick of the deception
I take the fall
The breeze is so kind
Earth takes it all
I’ve found my piece of mind
Copyright ©
Channing
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2005-09-19 18:44:55]
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Re: Peace of Mind
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by Archie on
Monday, 19th September 2005 @ 06:57:59 PM AEST
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| I hope that is not true. I think you want something more or else you would not have written this. What is it? |
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Re: Peace of Mind
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by trixxx on
Monday, 19th September 2005 @ 07:55:11 PM AEST
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hmm, i like it, very thoughtful
taut, and then restful, very nice |
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Re: Peace of Mind
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by emphaticplacebo on
Tuesday, 20th September 2005 @ 08:04:47 AM AEST
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Great write.
Well worded and thought out. I really got into this poem. Keep up the great work and I look forward to reading more
Dan |
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