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If I Left Today
Contributed by
ksuho11
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Monday, 19th September 2005 @ 05:04:19 PM in AEST
Topic:
goodbyepoetry
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If I Left Today
If I left today
Could I make it up to you
I wouldn't care that I don't know
Wouldn't care what was before me
I can't see it in your eyes
So many things you want to say
I'm scared for how I feel
I love you more than any other before
If I left today
Would you give me a chance
A chance to show you
How much I feel for you
A chance to make up for everything
Everything that I failed at
I tried my best, gave you my all
All that I am is nothing without you
If I left today
Would you have things unsaid
If I left today
Could I show you
If I left today
Would I leave alone
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Re: If I Left Today
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by sprinter27 on
Monday, 19th September 2005 @ 05:08:26 PM AEST
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nice write... you expressed your feelings well in this. and i hope that to all the questions the answer is yes. good write, i liked it, keep up the good work!
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Re: If I Left Today
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by Archie on
Monday, 19th September 2005 @ 06:06:46 PM AEST
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This is a great poem, I am reminded of a song when I read it
"We'll have our quarrels
and you will upset me but what can I do
You've been mine ever since I met you
and I'll never leave you"
Quote from "You were made for me" by Sam Cooke |
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Re: If I Left Today
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 19th September 2005 @ 11:06:49 PM AEST
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I completely relate with this poem. Love the last lines:
"If I left today
Would I leave alone"
Very strong and powerful. Could feel your emotions in this. Great write and thanks for sharing |
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