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gently i die
Contributed by
loura
on
Monday, 19th September 2005 @ 02:58:48 PM in AEST
Topic:
ambiguous
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With thy lips I seek for more of you,
Because with you more of myself I find.
And death comes upon me with the rhythm of your body,
As a blade in my stomach and blood in my mouth.
Slowly darkness surrounds me,
And gently I die.
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Re: gently i die
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by Jenni_K on
Monday, 19th September 2005 @ 04:03:07 PM AEST
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Nicely done....
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Re: gently i die
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by lostrelic on
Monday, 19th September 2005 @ 04:25:48 PM AEST
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very cool write short but to the point
great write
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Re: gently i die
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by orgygirl on
Tuesday, 20th September 2005 @ 07:02:23 PM AEST
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| This was great, I especially liked your choice of words for this one. |
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