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Still beautiful
Contributed by
lostinmyself
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Monday, 19th September 2005 @ 02:29:09 PM in AEST
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I know you could be beautiful,
If only you would try,
Just wipe away the circles,
That live under your eyes.
Push aside that frown,
And give yourself a smile,
I know that you can be beautiful,
If only for a while.
Your eyes will really twinkle,
If you dry away those tears,
You do not need the sadness,
It piles on the years.
Breathe, just for a moment,
Brush the hair back from your face,
Let me see that smile,
It's the epitome of grace.
I hope you can believe it,
See what I can see,
For though you look just 'normal'
You're so beautiful to me.
I know it sounds cliche,
But your beauty is inside,
You're as beautiful as nature,
You should never try to hide.
[But your smile makes you stunning,
When you do it with your eyes,
So I wish you'd smile more,
And hope you'll smile inside.]
But even when you frown,
you're always beautiful,
To me.
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Re: Still beautiful
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by MorningDove on
Monday, 19th September 2005 @ 02:43:27 PM AEST
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A smile can transform anyone into a stunning beauty in my mind. Seeing the inner radiance appear is miraculous. Your words are so very true for many many people. Smiling can even make you feel better inside and just might make the difference in someone else's day.
Smiling at you,
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Re: Still beautiful
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by Winterland on
Monday, 19th September 2005 @ 02:56:52 PM AEST
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What a wonderful and wise poem. And as Rita says, very true! Great job!
*smiles*
Jennifer |
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Re: Still beautiful
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by Jeff_Scott_Morehead on
Monday, 19th September 2005 @ 03:42:21 PM AEST
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Excellent write...
The flow was flewless.
Loved it
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Re: Still beautiful
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 19th September 2005 @ 03:50:42 PM AEST
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| Amen its easier to smile thamn frown so turn that frown upside down,,loved this Hugs Eddy... |
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Re: Still beautiful
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by Willofree on
Monday, 19th September 2005 @ 04:32:00 PM AEST
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Yes a beautiful poem on one of the most powerful forces on earth, which would be the
the charm and warmth of a wondeful smile. It can melt the toughest heart or transform a terrible day.......
Wonderful write, Philly
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Re: Still beautiful
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by Archie on
Monday, 19th September 2005 @ 04:34:30 PM AEST
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| Thanks for a well written and honest poem. Yea I should smile more, though it's more than yesterday i hope it will be more tomorrow. |
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Re: Still beautiful
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by Sahara on
Monday, 19th September 2005 @ 06:45:10 PM AEST
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A masterpiece... need I say more?
Very beautiful and touching write.
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Re: Still beautiful
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by Fionndruinne on
Tuesday, 20th September 2005 @ 02:48:17 AM AEST
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Touching and beautiful. And very true. This is an important message, and I hope that those who truly need it will take it to heart.
You're as beautiful as nature,
You should never try to hide.
I liked those lines a lot.
Andrew |
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Re: Still beautiful
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by Stitch on
Tuesday, 20th September 2005 @ 03:28:59 PM AEST
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I don't have a single criticism. You done good, girl. You done real good.
Stitch
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Re: Still beautiful
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by Silent-No-More on
Tuesday, 20th September 2005 @ 03:50:51 PM AEST
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I'll just say ditto to everything Andrew said. He's spot on if you ask me. AND he extracted the very same lines that I was going to point to. Yep.... that Andrew knows what he's talking 'bout all right. lol
It's lovely, Phil... truly.
~Snem |
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Re: Still beautiful
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by Nazmythian on
Tuesday, 20th September 2005 @ 04:32:07 PM AEST
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Hey Philly ... do me a favor ... stand before a mirror and recite these lines to the image there ... and believe. You are beautiful and have truly shown that here.
Nazzy ~ |
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Re: Still beautiful
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by WAE on
Wednesday, 21st September 2005 @ 03:12:55 PM AEST
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As usual I am too late not to repeat someone... Lovely one.
Alex |
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Re: Still beautiful
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by fielding88 on
Sunday, 25th September 2005 @ 06:00:09 PM AEST
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| You've produced something beautiful in itself here. I mean the concept was dealt with so brilliantly, and it was probably the most touching thing I've read in quite some time (and trust me, you've had a lot of competition! lol) and I'm just really impressed with it. The ending sums things up in such a great way, too, and my favorite verse would probably be the first, as it just set the mood for all others to follow. Just amazingly done. |
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Re: Still beautiful
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by Willofree on
Monday, 26th September 2005 @ 01:03:59 PM AEST
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This is a beautiful poem with a lot of wisdom. For when the inner beauty is allowed outward overt expression, then one is truely transformed into a real beauty.I really like the rhyme and flow of this poem.
Well done, Philly
Will |
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Re: Still beautiful
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 1st October 2005 @ 08:08:17 PM AEST
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Oh wow, phil. This was, no, IS extraordinary. I must print this one out
so I can revisit it when my demons sneak in to steal my confindence
away. I'm in awe at how it simply DRIPS with altruism. A beautifully
crafted poem from a rare and sensitive soul. Bravo. Humbled, am I.
*hugs*
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Re: Still beautiful
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by Wachumiri on
Tuesday, 4th October 2005 @ 06:17:57 AM AEST
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Too true. A smile can make all the difference in the world. I love the part about smiling with your eyes. I love eyes that smile.
Anyway, well done. I applaud you for a poem well written.
Take care.
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Re: Still beautiful
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by darkangeleyes57 on
Thursday, 6th October 2005 @ 12:18:07 PM AEST
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This was so beautiful. It reminded me of myself. The way you described this person in your poem was just like describing me. I never can smile and it is hard to even try but when that smile happens people tell me i am beautiful but it never can last it always goes away. Great poem..
christina |
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Re: Still beautiful
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 20th November 2005 @ 09:17:40 PM AEST
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Very excellent write, PhillyGirl! ! ! ! ! This is a poem that everyone should read on a daily basis; including yourself. Definitely a classic timeless masterpiece.
Now I'm gonna read it again since I am already behind on my daily dose. :-)
Tim |
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