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Precious Life
Contributed by
Jeff_Scott_Morehead
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Monday, 19th September 2005 @ 02:19:24 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Precious Life
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I’m so proud of you, my little boy
You’ve been such an incredible joy
You make it perfectly clear to see
Just how precious life can be
Your beautiful smile lights my day
Makes me lonesome when I’m away
Your warm hugs make me strong
They stay with me all day long
You placed me on a pedestal, standing tall
Yet you’re forgiving, when I fall
You’ve showed me things I couldn’t see
By placing your trust in me
It’s my honor to do my best
To prepare you for life’s test
To ensure you grown up stout
With the love that life’s about
Oh my son, you beautiful boy
You’ve given me such incredible joy
I hope you will always clearly see
Just how precious you are to me
Copyright ©
Jeff_Scott_Morehead
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2005-09-19 14:19:24]
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Re: Precious Life
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by lostinmyself on
Monday, 19th September 2005 @ 02:31:49 PM AEST
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Awwww.
I like this, it just screams 'cute'
Honestly, it's lovely. I love the pedestal stanza.
In fact, I love it all.
Great write,
*hugs*
Phil xxx |
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Re: Precious Life
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by MorningDove on
Monday, 19th September 2005 @ 02:46:05 PM AEST
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Being a parent is one of the most precious gifts we can be given. I feel sure you are a wonderful Dad and the fruit generally doesn't fall far from the tree. He will be a wonderful man just like his Dad.
Smiles,
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Re: Precious Life
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by remote on
Monday, 19th September 2005 @ 03:01:59 PM AEST
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To ensure you grow up stout
Screams of pride and love I'd say. |
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Re: Precious Life
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by Winterland on
Monday, 19th September 2005 @ 03:06:04 PM AEST
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What a wonderful tribute to the love you share with your son! It speaks clearly about your feelings towards parenthood and your family. Great job!
Jennifer |
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Re: Precious Life
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by Archie on
Monday, 19th September 2005 @ 04:44:59 PM AEST
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This is very good.
I can tell you have a great love for your family by this poem. |
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Re: Precious Life
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by brew on
Monday, 19th September 2005 @ 06:48:14 PM AEST
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Now that was a very sweet write, for your son, and aout him. Kids, are great.i hope to have many one day. right now, i get to just see my nieces........but they are so sweet and neat.!
brew~ |
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Re: Precious Life
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 21st September 2005 @ 11:55:00 PM AEST
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| Great poem!!!! Children are a real joy; especially when they are your own. Proof of love at first sight and proof of the miracle of life. |
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